Part 4: Exercises
Sentence Editing
- Overview
- Sentence Editing
Rewrite the following sentences to make them more direct and concise. Apply the methods discussed in the Verify and Revise section.
- Program screens are screens that submit a program to the system for execution. (13)
- Determination of marketing strategy takes place at the vice-presidential level. (11)
- This document thus stands alone with respect to completeness. (9)
- I am in receipt of the note you forwarded concerning the retirement of your excess stock. Hopefully I will answer the questions you have. (24)
- The intent of this manual is to provide, in one place, a guide to all of the operations to be undertaken during the main phase of the VeteransŐ Health Survey. (30)
- Our lack of data prevented evaluation of physician practice effectiveness in treatment targeting to populations of greatest care need. (20)
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